July 18, 2021

weekly scribblings #76 writing a blank

i wrote this for the writing a blank challenge, but then got distracted by the 4th of july holiday, and then by summer in general. this a was a fun challenge, really enjoyed, sorry i missed the deadline


i draw a blank and put it in a frame

a gilded thing

i make a blanket statement

                and sign my name

 

and like a cockroach in the toilet bowl

i know its beautiful

and the fish in the fish bowl never knows it so good

and like the endless supply of old mattresses

behind rotting old apartment complexes

the way the trashman hauls them away

the way the tenets bring more

we forget how to sleep

                we forget how to pay our rent

i draw a blank

you write a check

 

i draw a blank and a tree springs up

i draw a blank and the lady in a lake floats up with some-kind-of-a-stick

i draw a blank, and it is good and it is right

i draw a blank and a blank draws back

 

nothing surprises no one

or everyone, or anyone

nothing surprises anyone

anymore

history is not a mystery

it’s a rollercoaster

                i’ll draw you a picture

but need to be psychic to see it

need to be drunk

                to buy a ticket

 

i draw a blank, and a critic screams fake

so i draw another

but this time with more thunder

like shooting rubber bands at stars

like seeing angels in parking lot oil stains

a think tank running out of think

a tank with no artillery shells

shooting blanks and blaming that blanketiy-blank-blank

                                                                                   for all of it

like three blackbirds on a tree limb

like playing the shell game on the seashore

i’m speaking only in blanks, i’m throwing blank paint by the bucket

all of it sticking to nothing

i count backwards from infinity, draw a blank and think

everything is going to be ok

and a blank is a blank is a blank

is a blank

by any other name

i draw a blank

and history is a mystery

is a weather report

is a primitive night sport

is a pretty horse

                is a burning bush

i draw a blank

nothing new

i draw a blank

                and so do you

 


posted for the writers pantry at poets and storytellers united


22 comments:

  1. "i draw a blank and a blank draws back"
    Such a simple powerhouse statement. Exactly, put some effort in, see what came back.

    Thanks for dropping by my blog today

    Much💜love

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    1. thank you gilliena, so glad you stopped by, hope you are well and all of my best wishes.

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  2. Wow, so many things a blank can do! (When powered by creativity.)

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    1. thank you rosemary, glad you liked this

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  3. Your poetry, your style is .... mesmerizing, fascinating, inspiring (me to be better.) I have read this three times now, still finding something I hadn't seen the first, second time.

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    1. thanks helen, for the high praise, i try to make them worthy of a second or third read, so glad you liked this.

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  4. This blankety-blank poem is so creative!

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    1. well thank you debi, this was so blankety blank bank fun to write =)

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  5. This is like a think tank gone berserk, filling in the blanks.....creatively!

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    1. think tank gone berserk... that's my mojo, thank so much bev, glad you enjoyed this

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  6. This is a great exercise in writing. love the imagery, it seems to be coming from all sides, each clamoring for urgent attention.

    I like what you said about "history is not a mystery it’s a rollercoaster". Pretty true much of the way. :)

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    1. " "history is not a mystery it’s a rollercoaster"." we already know what going to happen, if we just pay attention. thanks dsnake1, glad you liked this.

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  7. Off to listen to an Edie Brickell album and a Taylor Swift song now. :)

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    1. thanks! glad you liked this, and btw, i tried to leave comments on your bog but couldn't figure out how, am i missing something? thanks again!

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  8. Love those twists and turns. I draw lots of blanks. Looks like you bank them.

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    1. ... and its a rather large account, not worth much, but blanks on top of blanks on top of blacks, thanks colleen, so glad you liked.

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  9. Interesting, entertaining and thought provoking - all in one package.

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    1. thanks joel, so glad you liked and thanks for stopping by.

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  10. I was quite impressed with this--it wrapped me up in its scaffolding of word steps and I was climbing them up and down, then feeling them slide into a roller coaster ride as you stitched them all together into a unit like a blowing scarf. Really some good writing, some original thinking in this one , Phillip. The end is perfect. Glad I stopped by.

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    1. thamks joy, glad you like this one, i want just riffing it for a challenge thing, but i might do a little more work on it.

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  11. There's a lot to love here. The sharp imagery, the way the lines hit like staccato drum beats, the frenetic energy running through it... all good stuff. I keep going back to the lines "history is not a mystery/ it’s a rollercoaster".

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    1. thanks rommy, glad you enjoyed, and yes, staccato beat, that's spot on, i was hoping that would come thru. thanks again

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