don’t take the lumps
out
of my gravy, i say
don’t beat the lumps
out
of my gravy
cause i’ve been craving baked potato
i’ve been craving dirt fruit
put something gritty on my plate
put some soil in my soul
thirty minutes in the oven
is
eternal
and i’ve been craving rain on hot pavement
trees with thick leaves to hide me from the sun
i’ve been craving playground simplicity
i’ve been craving crystal balls that know it all
and
never tell
so don’t take those lumps
out
of my gravy
nope-nope-nope
don’t steal no lumps
from
my gravy
cause
i’m craving love
the kind that chases me down
so put both hands on the back of my neck
when
you kiss me
i’ve been craving moon landings
and endless human compassion
the rehydration of the earth
streets alive, café windows full of people
faces full of smiles and mouths full of porkchop
(pass
the gravy)
i’ve been craving wasting my time
in old blue cars on dirt roads
a magic stone to skip all the way to the other shore
stevie wonder’s superstition and my cherie amour
(pass
the gravy)
that lumpy candy
cause i’m craving something chucky, something savory
something
funky
it’s
not crazy
just means i’m hungry for more
or less, whatever blessing be for me
that desire
that
earth-fire
put the fleet in my feet
put the hustle in my whistle
feed
the soil to my soul
and pass the gravy
OMG the is so earthy yummy. My favourite lines
ReplyDelete"so put both hands on the back of my neck
when you kiss me"
Thanks for dropping by to read mine
Much❤love
thanks gillena, glad you enjoyed
DeleteThis just sings--that A sound like in Gravy is everywhere in the piece and it lights is up --makes me want to dance
ReplyDeletethank you audrey, so glad you liked this
DeleteOMG, this awakes all my "cravins"! What a fun ramble through your fantasies! Love it!
ReplyDeletethank you bev, glad you enjoyed this
DeleteIncredible. Definitely begs to be performed aloud.
ReplyDeleteMy faves:
“i’ve been craving playground simplicity
i’ve been craving crystal balls that know it all
and never tell”
“nope-nope-nope
don’t steal no lumps
from my gravy
cause i’m craving love
the kind that chases me down”
“so put both hands on the back of my neck
when you kiss me
i’ve been craving moon landings
and endless human compassion”
“i’ve been craving wasting my time ... that lumpy candy”
So, yeah. I’m crazy about this style. :)
thanks peppermint, means a lot to me that you enjoyed this
Deletehey, peppermint, your blogs keep disappearing, where to i go to read your work? everything ok?
Deletelol ... let’s chalk it up to mental illness :)
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alright, it's back online! and mental illnesses are some of my favorite illnesses, so no worries =)
DeleteOh yeah, we need some lumps in our gravy; let's not go bland. This is a lovely, joyous read in the way it sings and dances along. And I love all the half-rhymes and echoes. Definitely a great one to be performed aloud, I agree.
ReplyDeletethank you rosemary, glad you enjoyed this
DeleteI like old blue cars on dirt roads. I want to go to a poetry yardsale!
ReplyDeleteyes, dirt roads are my favorite roads, thank you colleen, glad you enjoyed
Deleteyou sure love your potatoes. and gravy.
ReplyDeletewonder when it is safe for all of us to go out and play.
thanks dsnake, glad you liked
DeleteOh, WOW! Your words, vivid imagery and rhythm have me sit at the edge of my sit as I read. It deserves to be read aloud or as performance poetry. Outstanding!
ReplyDeletethamks khaya. so glad you liked this
Delete"and i’ve been craving rain on hot pavement
ReplyDeletetrees with thick leaves to hide me from the sun
i’ve been craving playground simplicity
i’ve been craving crystal balls that know it all
and never tell"
I love those lines so much. The same goes for the tone, rhythm, and mood. They depth and fun to the poem, making the topic light and serious at the same time. The end is extra delicious.
thank you magaly, so glad you liked this
DeleteI adore the playfulness and earnestness of this. It was delightful to read out loud a second time. It could just be my take on it, but that longing for lumps seems like a demand for realness, because a perfectly smoothed out gravy (or life) lacks that character that makes it meaningful.
ReplyDeletethanks rommy, for reading it twice even!
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