November 5, 2021

road trip

 

we can travel together

                kick back in the lap of a classic chevy ragtop

                engine block roaring bold existence

                soaring down huckleberry highways

                the eyes of god spinning

                and every loose strand of your ponytail

                painting the desert blonde

 

we’ll hunt down all the blind spots

                eyes too wide to have corners, we’ll make up names

                for the stuff maps leave behind, trash-heap landmarks

                lost truckstop civilizations, the grand madness of utah

 

we’ll decorate the dashboard like noah’s ark

                with your collection of plastic pez dispensers

                mickey mouse and donald duck and whatever

                that frog-looking thing is suppose to be

                i’ll laugh at your cheap toys, you’ll make fun of my ugly hat

 

we can bum rush a million sideroads

                or linger too long in time traveling roadside restaurants

                jukebox juiced, shuffling dozens of yesterdays

                eat hotdogs and watermelon in a winnemucca parking lot

                pour bottled water over a broken radiator

                in arizona heat waves

 

you can make a map

                of cloud formations, i’ll navigate the radio

                we can kill the static with philosophical gibberish

                or sing along with hillbilly fiddles

                scratching out lazy love songs

 

we’ll take shelter

                in each other, and motel showers too small for two

                take epic naps and ruin most of our clothes

                in a piece of crap laundromat

 

we can witness the heartbeats of alien cities

                i’ll admit I’m lost, and you can lead me

                thru santa fe streets, explore the festival of summer

                mingle in the heat of human nature, make totem poles

                out of strangers, drink the local wine and tell true-ish tales

                of exodus and diaspora

 

we’ll pose like stay dogs

                in tourist trap photographs, you all ragdoll beautiful

        me in my ugly hat

 

we’ll merge in and out of uhaul caravans

                in grapes of wrath formation

                across the four dimensions of america

                black and white and asphalt gray

                and you can crash in the backseat, paint your toenails

                whatever color you want

 

we can vanish into blue mountains

                the way all good expeditions do

                a gospel of impulse

                nothing but myth

                and a trail of sunflower seeds    

 

 

2009

posted for the world premier of the spectacular "friday writings" at poets and storytellers united

28 comments:

  1. Another outstanding poem. I hope everyone will *listen* to the reading. I like this kind of poetry that is direct and vivid and never boring and uses straightforward language.

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  2. This is basically the perfect poem—the storytelling, yes, but also your keen ear for sound and flow.

    my favorites:
    “soaring down huckleberry highways
    the eyes of god spinning
    and every loose strand of your ponytail
    painting the desert blonde”
    “we’ll decorate the dashboard like Noah’s ark
    with your collection of plastic pez dispensers”
    “jukebox juiced”
    “we’ll take shelter
    in each other, and motel showers too small for two
    take epic naps and ruin most of our clothes”
    “mingle in the heat of human nature, make totem poles
    out of strangers”

    I love how all of these details must have actually happened because they’re so specific. So you speaking of myth at the end makes me think you’re looking back on a past relationship, but so fondly that you know you’d do it all over again.

    “we’ll pose like stay dogs” ... Typo or intentional deviation, I love this line.

    “you all ragdoll beautiful ...
    a gospel of impulse“ ... <3

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    1. hey, i was in the middle of writing a comment on your poem and then i went to publish it and your blog disappeared... no fair!

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    2. It was just awful. I don’t have anything worthy of sharing. Thank you so much for being kind, but I really don’t belong out here.

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    3. i strongly disagree, can we talk about this, will you email me?

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    4. I’m not supposed to talk to boys.

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    5. well i'm not a boy, i'm a friend, and i'm a little concerned

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    6. Friend, I am bipolar to the max. Please do not worry about me. My mind-state flip-flops so drastically. Believe me, there is an extreme counter-balance to my low.

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    7. ok, i can definitely understand that. and you should know that you are not alone, especially in creative communities like this, you are among friends. your writing is brilliant, i so enjoy it, and you are obviously way smarter than me, and perhaps most of us. please leave your blog up so that we can read and enjoy and admire it. please? just keep one balloon string tethered to us, keep the blog up =)

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  3. No way was I going to miss hearing this! Love the way you say Utah. Motel showers, laundromats, totem pole strangers ~~~ ah. Just happen to have a bottle of green nail polish.

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  4. What a delightful conversational poem, all the better for hearing you read it. Truly a unique travelogue! Applause from my corner of the world!

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  5. First, let me say it again: you have an amazing reading voice. I'm an audiobook addict, so I truly appreciate narration that makes you want to listen forever.

    And I love the poem, all of it. It brought memories of my last road trip to Joshua Tree National Park. We drove for days, stopping in every strange attraction, sleeping in motels or camping if the weather was good and moon calling. Even the sunflower seeds made me smile. According to my husband, he finds the evidence of my incessant sunflower seed eating years and years after.

    Such a beautiful poem to travel with...

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  6. What a seductive, magical journey you take us all on in this poem – and so beautifully read, too. Thank you for giving me so much deep pleasure!

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    1. Oh, and thanks for making our new Friday Writings at P&SU sound so grand! (Of course it's true it IS the world premier. *Smile*.)

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  7. Loved the reading and the whole vibe of the poem... brought back memories of road trips in the U.S. from a very long time ago! Thanks!

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  8. You paint a vivid picture of New Mexico and now I want to return with someone special.

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  9. Nice one reminded me of a road trip from Brooklyn to Boston with sister and friends while i was on vacation. Yours is much more interesting though

    Much💛love

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  10. how i loved this road trip across America.
    the small towns, the wind blowing in the face, the heat and the little details of Americana, this is a poem of adventure and beauty.

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  11. You flesh out the classic road trip scenario here with an expansive list of events, accessories and feelings both real and surreal--this is why we go on the road, all of us from Chaucer's pilgrims to Kerouac, to see what we are, to worship at the shrines, and to look at the crazy freakin hell around us and maybe find that place where a ponytail paints the desert blonde, and our totem poles make some sort of sense, even just as trophy. I like the form here, with the intro lines to the meat of each stanza--works well. Really a fine bit of writing,phillip, with a spot-on perfect finale.

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  12. So much joy found on a road trip. Another brilliant poem, Phillip. And I enjoy your readings, always.

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  13. Wonderful memories play out in these words. Alas, I fear the days of road trips are in my distant past. I have too many health problems to make them a viable option.

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  14. This sounds just way too sweet. Two lovers without a care in the world, Route 66 all the way, with side trips, little money, not quite hippy but happy. Loved this.

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  15. Hoo-WEE! From that humdinger of an opening stanza, to "make totem poles out of strangers, to so nice "ragdoll beautiful" this just jumps right ff the page and into life at one's feet. Jack K. would love it, but Jack never wrote with this particular kind of easy sexy and (yes) bonhomie. This isn't dex-fueled, this is joy-fueled. Can't say how much I enjoyed it!

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  16. I rode with you folk, it's one of the fun things I do is taking road trips. Your (silent) partner surely enjoyed being with you.
    My ride is a ragtop also, a black 1998 Ford Mustang GT convertible. It was my retirement present to me. I still run it hard, but not much over a hundred anymore, and if that, not for long as metal fatigue can do in, car and passengers.
    This is my first visit here, I like. And thanks for your visit and nice comment.
    ..

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  17. "the heartbeats of alien cities"

    What a stunning phrase! Thanks for reminding me that every city has a different heartbeat, and the cities that keep calling us back (as Guadalajara does me), beats with the rhythm of my own heart.

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  18. I’m praying for you, your surgery, and your recovery. Let me know if you have any specific prayer requests/needs.

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    1. thank you pepper! sorry i haven't been around. got super busy and chaotic here for me. i have surgery on the 1st, this wednesday, and not sure when i will be back online after that. hope you had a great holiday, i had more family in than i could swing a baseball bat at...

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    2. I figured as much. You focus all your energy on healing. Blessings, friend.

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