December 23, 2021

red truck in bookstore (2nd draft)

 


the artist calls it

red truck in bookstore

like

still-life

like

white flowers in vase by window

or

pond with clouds over mountain

stuff like that


but different

 

inspired by the red truck that crashed into the old capitol hill bookstore last night

on the corner of colfax and grant

soon after, people gathered to gawk

just looky-loos  

but some of them were painters

and some of them got excited at this rare opportunity to paint

red truck in bookstore

and set up their rigs

 

and look here, the artist was clever

under the right front wheel

a children’s book with a cartoon red truck on the cover

 

sadly, some can't shake the universe

and catch ripe fruit falling

some can’t look directly at

red truck in bookstore

and turn away, instead they paint

old honda with flat tire

or

broken bottle in gutter

or

stray dog pissing on dumpster

 

as for method and technique, it was a fortunate disaster

imagine the exact moment the art happened

drunk teenagers texting in red truck spinning out over median and crash into bookstore

imagine painting that!

 

imagine the glory, imagine all the art critics wetting their pants

imagine the headlines:

last night, a red truck crashed headfirst into another red truck inside the capitol hill bookstore 

one real as red steel, the other a fairytale, witnesses claim “art copies life”

no fatalities reported, rescue crews and postmodern art students working around the clock

 

personally, i like

red truck in bookstore

its brave, its original, its like, both urban and quaint all squished together

its colorful, if you like endless layers of red

yes, i really do like

red truck in bookstore

just not on my block




red truck in bookstore

 (from cbs news 7, denver) 


14 comments:

  1. i really liked the imagery in this poem. matter-of-fact but also cheeky at the same time.
    Always a pleasure to read your works.

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  2. Never expected the dose of reality at the end! What a poem!

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  3. I like the double meaning in “block.”

    And “pants” is missing an “s” ... unless it isn’t. Perhaps it was intentional, which also works.

    I haven’t heard this story; I am taking a break from almost all news.

    Happy holidays; I hope you are healing well.

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    1. hey pepper! thanks for the heads-up on the typo. and yes i'm healing well. can't walk on it yet, but i'm so ready to go home, still staying with relatives and, well, suburbia just isn't for me. happy holidays to you too! is your blog up? i'd love to go vivit

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    3. One of my kids received a Christmas gift wrapped in red-truck wrapping paper today! So cute. I love kismetic moments like those. :)

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    4. that is cute, was there a toy red truck inside?

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    5. Spider-Man pajamas and an electric toothbrush

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  4. As art, it would be interesting, momentarily, but it would not go on my wall. The broken bottle in a ditch would bring more imagination. But.... instead, your poetry would be much better appreciate, and is! Happy Christmas holidays!

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    1. thanks jc, and no, i wouldn't recommend putting red trucks on your walls, kind of messy. also, your request for edna st. vincent millay did not fall on deaf ears, i'll start working on it after the new year =)

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  5. Love the way you've managed to fuse art and life here, making them two wings on a confused but determined bird. I laughed out loud at "rescue crews and postmodern art students working around the clock.." and the stanza before it, too, with the failed attempts. Good to see you writing again, Phillip, and hope you are soon free from the chains of suburbia. Merriest Christmas you can have, my friend.

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    1. "confused but determined bird", thats funny, and pretty much spot on, thank you joy, enjoy your holiday

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