June 28, 2021

sunday muse #166


 

when i walk on two legs

i feel nothing

intruder blindfolded

fool of the world  

if i crawl like an ancestor

chest to the ground

feel the earthbeat, make it my own

mother’s love flows in these valleys

swimming in shadows

white sapling and raspberry cover

i am thirsty and to find her

wander the blackjack

follow rockweed paths, follow the clover  

tree moss and columbine

into the cold river

i drink

and sunset explodes the sky

white water catches fire

i see it

feel it

but i trade my language for the soul of a wakan

so i can’t speak it

but for the hair of my neck

and growing glow of my eyes

everything

alive

like mist after rain

stars on frozen snow

bluespruce and sage

the way the redtail lands on a tree limb

and folds his wings

song of the summer reeds  

and the taste of the river


posted for the the sunday muse

20 comments:

  1. This is an absolutely gorgeous poem. Such vivid imagery, such beautiful lines......sigh. i absolutely love it. Reading it was balm for a worried mind.


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    1. thank you sherry, so glad i was able to help soothe your mind =)

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  2. A graphic portrayal of a Wild Wolf's='s view of his world. Not only did you set the scene, but you included thoughts and feelings attributed to him, - on a deep and meaningful level for animal and human alike. Such a joy to read. :-)

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    1. thank you jinksy, glad you enjoyed this

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  3. There is so much atmosphere in your poem. You kept us looking at the drinking wolf and yet you widened our vision. Luv it.
    Thanks for dropping by to read mine

    Much💛love

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    1. thank you gallena, glad you liked this, and reading your poem was my pleasure.

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  4. Oh Phillip this is breathtaking! Every line from the beginning captures a moment and thoughts from the wolf himself! I love love love this!!

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    1. thank you carrie, so happy you enjoyed this

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  5. Beautifully drawn from the wolf's perspective. The last lines took me there!

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  6. This is stunning! A journey into the wolf’s realm. I thoughtfully / thankfully followed …

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    1. thank you helen... hey did you post this week? i don't remember seeing your poem.

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  7. I am all but paralyzed by this incredible piece.

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    1. thank you, so glad you liked... ive been looking for your work, but i don't see anything new on your blog, are you still writing?

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  8. Oh, you have so brilliantly given the perfect voice to the image.

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    1. thank you sussie, i know nothing about brilliant or perfect, but so glad you liked

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  9. thank you shay, so glad you liked this.

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  10. Stunning poem with a different point of view.

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  11. So lovely....and I learned a new (to me) word -- wakan. You used it well.

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