when i walk on two legs
i feel nothing
intruder blindfolded
fool of the world
if i crawl like an ancestor
chest to the ground
feel the earthbeat, make it my own
mother’s love flows in these valleys
swimming in shadows
white sapling and raspberry cover
i am thirsty and to find her
wander the blackjack
follow rockweed paths, follow the clover
tree moss and columbine
into the cold river
i drink
and sunset explodes the sky
white water catches fire
i see it
feel it
but i trade my language for the soul of a wakan
so i can’t speak it
but for the hair of my neck
and growing glow of my eyes
everything
alive
like mist after rain
stars on frozen snow
bluespruce and sage
the way the redtail lands on a tree limb
and folds his wings
song of the summer reeds
and the taste of the river
posted for the the sunday muse

This is an absolutely gorgeous poem. Such vivid imagery, such beautiful lines......sigh. i absolutely love it. Reading it was balm for a worried mind.
ReplyDeletethank you sherry, so glad i was able to help soothe your mind =)
DeleteA graphic portrayal of a Wild Wolf's='s view of his world. Not only did you set the scene, but you included thoughts and feelings attributed to him, - on a deep and meaningful level for animal and human alike. Such a joy to read. :-)
ReplyDeletethank you jinksy, glad you enjoyed this
DeleteThere is so much atmosphere in your poem. You kept us looking at the drinking wolf and yet you widened our vision. Luv it.
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by to read mine
Much💛love
thank you gallena, glad you liked this, and reading your poem was my pleasure.
DeleteOh Phillip this is breathtaking! Every line from the beginning captures a moment and thoughts from the wolf himself! I love love love this!!
ReplyDeletethank you carrie, so happy you enjoyed this
DeleteBeautifully drawn from the wolf's perspective. The last lines took me there!
ReplyDeletethanks bev, so glad you liked this
DeleteThis is stunning! A journey into the wolf’s realm. I thoughtfully / thankfully followed …
ReplyDeletethank you helen... hey did you post this week? i don't remember seeing your poem.
DeleteI am all but paralyzed by this incredible piece.
ReplyDeletethank you, so glad you liked... ive been looking for your work, but i don't see anything new on your blog, are you still writing?
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DeleteOh, you have so brilliantly given the perfect voice to the image.
ReplyDeletethank you sussie, i know nothing about brilliant or perfect, but so glad you liked
Deletethank you shay, so glad you liked this.
ReplyDeleteStunning poem with a different point of view.
ReplyDeleteSo lovely....and I learned a new (to me) word -- wakan. You used it well.
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