July 17, 2021

dverse meeting the bar, chant poetry


today take what you need

tomorrow give what you got

 

today we are young

summery and moonful

tomorrow

winter walks alone

 

today a garden

two tree squirrels and a place to chase

tomorrow

a vulture on my shoulder

 

today is a broken time machine

only knows how to now

tomorrow

we overclock are ancient hearts

 

today the pain is real

proof of existence

and we gather together

placebo memorial gazebo

and the birdbath in the middle

the water in the bowl seems somehow blessed

is the same rain that falls everywhere

cup your hands to catch some

and exist  

 

today i drink the world drunk and wild

tomorrow only dust in my cup

 

posted for meeting the bar at Dverse

18 comments:

  1. A vivid ode to the passing of time.

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    1. thank you kerfe, glad you enjoyed this

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  2. I think you describe the life how it is... especially the first couplet. We need to return what we have been given as young when we grow old... our knowledge and our money in one way or anothe.

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    1. i like your your interpretation here bjorn, and i agree, at least that's the way it ought to be. thanks again bjorn

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  3. This is gorgeous, Phillip. Especially this:
    “and we gather together
    placebo memorial gazebo
    and the birdbath in the middle
    the water in the bowl seems somehow blessed
    is the same rain that falls everywhere
    cup your hands to catch some
    and exist”

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    1. thank you, so glad you liked this, and thank you for sharing your site with me, i enjoyed the read, but couldn't figure out how to leave comments, i liked the images too, are they yours?

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    2. Unless you mean the ones on weheartit ... those are not mine. Those are just artsy pictures I like.

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    3. i'm not sure what wehearit is, i will have to go back and look. btw, i was trying to leave comments on your blog but couldn't find a coment section, an i missing something?

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    4. It’s a photography/art web site. So awesome. Great for vibey inspiration and stimulation for ekphrasis. Just make an account and start “hearting” the stuff you like.

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    7. ok, ill check that out

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  4. This really resonates with me, especially:

    'the water in the bowl seems somehow blessed

    is the same rain that falls everywhere

    cup your hands to catch some

    and exist'

    We only ever have this moment, really, don't we?

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    1. thank you ingrid, and yes, this is our only moment, no wait, i mean this one, oops, there it goes... thanks again

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  5. This is breathtakingly beautiful! I especially love; "and we gather together placebo memorial gazebo and the birdbath in the middle the water in the bowl seems somehow blessed is the same rain that falls everywhere cup your hands to catch some and exist."💝

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    1. thank you sanaa, thank you liked this. and it seems the section is everybody's favorite, and i'll confess, i've been sitting on it for years trying to figure out how to use it, so i'm glad it finally worked out.

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  6. I'm late to comment. Sorry. I've read this several times. It's so evocative and it fills in all the blanks!! Bravo

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