artwork "when the moon is fake and your mermaids cry"
copyright ziggy zagmyer
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(heads up! listen to the poem here)
illegal trombone serenade
artificial heartbeats
television flickering endless
shades of blue on walls crawling with artless intent and too
many signals crisscross a confection
that reeks of evening news and cheap booze and old
shoes that squeak on streets too
real spinning forever-cycles of red-yellow-green-red-yellow-
green-red-yellow-green-red-yellow-green
but we won’t know what any of that
means
until dogs remember their feet
and
(here we go again)
the
moon
the dream compass
the calendar stone
always the poet’s prisoner
always the lover’s lost butterfly
the lunatic’s faithful equation
(because she is a
lightning rod of chaos
and my heart is static cling!)
so up we go
up illegal ropes
up
balloon strings of hope
up-up-up
over the murky dark misery
over the neighborhood pawnshops
over the angry traffic cones, lonely
lamp posts
over the big helzberg diamond
billboard
ring
finger pointing to the moon
climb up to the roof of the city
and leap
reach out and grab that glory-glow
by the toe
but the moon is always fake
a riddle, a clay pigeon, a sleepy dreamer-fever
her big fake face reflected in
every apartment window
i try to kiss
each one
on the way down
(all the way down thinking maybe next
time try a butterfly net
or a magnet)
but dogs remember their feet
and when i sneak away, shameless
midnight gut-punched retreat
my shoes squeak
maybe just like
playing trombone
posted for the open mic at: D'verse

Great poem. There were a lot of great lines, but I really liked this one -- "(because she is a lightning rod of chaos and my heart is static cling!)"
ReplyDeletethanks susan, those were my favorite lines too, glad you liked
DeleteAmbitious work... I enjoy what you are reaching for here, in a fresh way and will be back for more...
ReplyDeletethanks scott, glad you enjoyed this.
DeleteThis is wonderful, a delightful stream-of-consciousness rich in sights and sounds!
ReplyDeletethanks thanks ingrid, that means a lot
DeleteYou had me at "illegal trombone serenade"
ReplyDeletethanks ron, glad you liked
DeleteThis is very good. I especially like these lines/sections:
ReplyDelete“until dogs remember their feet”
“the lunatic’s faithful equation”
the whole midsection, really ...
“the dream compass
the calendar stone
always the poet’s prisoner
always the lover’s lost butterfly
the lunatic’s faithful equation
(because she is a lightning rod of chaos
and my heart is static cling!)
so up we go
up illegal ropes
up imaginary hopes
up-up-up
over the murky dark misery
over the neighborhood thrift stores”
“reach out and grab that glory-glow”
“a riddle, a clay pigeon”
I very much like this style. I would like to hear it read aloud.
thank you so much. yeah, i wanted to read it at the live event but i couldn't get into the room, i think i missed the event. i didn't get to hear anyone else read either, so i was a little disappointed. so glad you enjoyed this
DeleteWe will have new events... I try to put them on facebook as well... it would have been great to hear you read this.
Deleteoh sorry bjorn, i didn't see this... good to know. about what time of day does the live part the open mic take place? i'm in colorado usa, mountain time.
DeleteSo many clever catch phrases here in this stream of idle thoughts. Great read!
ReplyDeletethank you bev, glad you enjoyed
DeleteSuch an amazing piece.
ReplyDeletethank you lucy, glad you liked this
DeleteWow, I love this!! Especially the illegal trombone serenade, and the moon as a calendar stone. I wish I'd heard you read it.
ReplyDeletethaake you kate. i didn't a chance to read it, but better luck next time at the next event.
DeleteThis is absolutely OUTSTANDING! ππ
ReplyDeletethank you senaa, so glad you stopped by.
DeleteI love so many lines here, so I could have copied the whole poem.
ReplyDeleteThe dog remembering their feet stuck with me...
thank you bjorn, glad you enjoyed this... it was a lot of fun to write
Deletealso here with a heart of static cling.
ReplyDeletethe repetition of the traffic light - so effective.
well, all of it. virtuoso (if not virtuous) ~
thank you grapeling... nothing wrong with a heart of static cling! thanks again
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