June 24, 2021

illegal trombone serenade

 


artwork "when the moon is fake and your mermaids cry"

copyright ziggy zagmyer


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(heads up! listen to the poem here)


illegal trombone serenade

artificial heartbeats

television flickering endless shades of blue on walls crawling with artless intent and too

many signals crisscross a confection that reeks of evening news and cheap booze and old

shoes that squeak on streets too real spinning forever-cycles of red-yellow-green-red-yellow-

green-red-yellow-green-red-yellow-green

 

but we won’t know what any of that means

until dogs remember their feet

and

 (here we go again)

                                                the moon

the dream compass

the calendar stone

always the poet’s prisoner

always the lover’s lost butterfly

the lunatic’s faithful equation

(because she is a lightning rod of chaos

and my heart is static cling!)

so up we go

up illegal ropes

                up balloon strings of hope           

                                                up-up-up

over the murky dark misery

over the neighborhood pawnshops

over the angry traffic cones, lonely lamp posts

over the big helzberg diamond billboard

                ring finger pointing to the moon

climb up to the roof of the city and leap

                                reach out and grab that glory-glow

by the toe

but the moon is always fake

a riddle, a clay pigeon, a sleepy dreamer-fever

her big fake face reflected in every apartment window

i try to kiss each one

                on the way down

(all the way down thinking maybe next time try a butterfly net

or a magnet)

 

but dogs remember their feet

and when i sneak away, shameless midnight gut-punched retreat

my shoes squeak

maybe just like

playing trombone 




posted for the open mic at: D'verse


24 comments:

  1. Great poem. There were a lot of great lines, but I really liked this one -- "(because she is a lightning rod of chaos and my heart is static cling!)"

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    1. thanks susan, those were my favorite lines too, glad you liked

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  2. Ambitious work... I enjoy what you are reaching for here, in a fresh way and will be back for more...

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  3. This is wonderful, a delightful stream-of-consciousness rich in sights and sounds!

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    1. thanks thanks ingrid, that means a lot

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  4. You had me at "illegal trombone serenade"

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  5. This is very good. I especially like these lines/sections:

    “until dogs remember their feet”
    “the lunatic’s faithful equation”
    the whole midsection, really ...
    “the dream compass
    the calendar stone
    always the poet’s prisoner
    always the lover’s lost butterfly
    the lunatic’s faithful equation
    (because she is a lightning rod of chaos
    and my heart is static cling!)
    so up we go
    up illegal ropes
    up imaginary hopes
    up-up-up
    over the murky dark misery
    over the neighborhood thrift stores”
    “reach out and grab that glory-glow”
    “a riddle, a clay pigeon”

    I very much like this style. I would like to hear it read aloud.

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    1. thank you so much. yeah, i wanted to read it at the live event but i couldn't get into the room, i think i missed the event. i didn't get to hear anyone else read either, so i was a little disappointed. so glad you enjoyed this

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    2. We will have new events... I try to put them on facebook as well... it would have been great to hear you read this.

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    3. oh sorry bjorn, i didn't see this... good to know. about what time of day does the live part the open mic take place? i'm in colorado usa, mountain time.

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  6. So many clever catch phrases here in this stream of idle thoughts. Great read!

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  7. Such an amazing piece.

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  8. Wow, I love this!! Especially the illegal trombone serenade, and the moon as a calendar stone. I wish I'd heard you read it.

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    1. thaake you kate. i didn't a chance to read it, but better luck next time at the next event.

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  9. This is absolutely OUTSTANDING! πŸ’πŸ’

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    1. thank you senaa, so glad you stopped by.

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  10. I love so many lines here, so I could have copied the whole poem.

    The dog remembering their feet stuck with me...

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    1. thank you bjorn, glad you enjoyed this... it was a lot of fun to write

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  11. also here with a heart of static cling.

    the repetition of the traffic light - so effective.

    well, all of it. virtuoso (if not virtuous) ~

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    1. thank you grapeling... nothing wrong with a heart of static cling! thanks again

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